Roza 0412: Repellant

Making of Page 11

Page 11 didn’t deviate too much from the original plan. I pulled back a couple shots and changed the first panel to an overhead view, to show more of the mud encroaching on Roza and Esten. Some small dialog changes were made, mostly for clarity and character consistency. Educated and old-fashioned Esten should always speak a bit differently from Roza.